It is missing the ending at the moment.
Feedback (Feedback gained through a group of AS media students and teacher)
- Liked the syncing to the music
- Liked the fact the Blue Man was being used
- Some shots were a bit shaky
- Liked disappearing Blue Man shot
- Was obvious Protagonist was walking backwards
- Was very confusing what the actual story was
- Note was too illegible
- More exposition is definitely needed
- Subliminal shot too short
To Change Based on Feedback
- We will add in more exposition about the character and why he is walkign around town, also create more of an attachment to the RAF medal e.g. Father died in Iraq war, therfore connects to medal.
- This explains backwards as his life has been turned upside down.
- Re-Do some of the shots, maybe all depending on conditions
- We will have more usage of the younger Gordon as this makes more exposition
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