Feedback: Needs more shots of the blue man to give a more Woah! factor. Like the shots that continue same action from different angles (match on action)
Music would be good if it is slow, maybe rewind.
The shots of blue man need to be made more blue(this has been edited in this cut you see here, but this feedback was given along the way by actor Ben Gibson)
(Feedback was gained by uploading on Youtube and then posting a post onto facebook for promotion)
Music and Sounds still need to be recorded, and noted that the titles at the beginning need to be edited e.g. 'A Short Film' will not make final cut
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your rough cut should be here!
ReplyDeleteplus you're STILL on USA time settings it seems (I'm being told this is being posted at 2.45pm; its 10.45pm)
IT WAS MEANT TO BE! YOUTUBE FAILED, GIMMIE A SEC!
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